EvilZone
Other => Creative Arts => : Chronic x September 13, 2012, 07:52:40 AM
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If you have haters your doing something right
Life is always stop and go, traffic light
Always keep going, foot to the floor
take hate and fuck it up some more
light a fire in your core
Hate is nothing more then a opinion
Everybodys got some,
you just gotta beat it, bass drum
chew it up and spit it out, sweet gum
dont let hate get inside your head
put it to fucking bed
bury a grave, shove it in it
make it submit to your will
straight up murder it, dont give it an option
Abortion pill.
Hate aint nothing to fear
Grab it in your hands and just tear
Trust me in the end, you'll overcome a hater
Send the hater to meet his fucking creator.
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I like this
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I like this
Why thanks<3.
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This is a nice poem ''rap", just one thing I recommend for one I'm not a rapper and I don't do poems but when you end a phrase make sure the next word rhymes when I read the "dont give it an option
Abortion pill." Hence the part "Abortion pill" afterwards it doesn't really rhyme and when you say it-it just loses it's bounce. I'm not trying to put you down or discourage you this really was great and it sounds wonderful just wanted to give some tip if it's worthy enough.
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This is a nice poem ''rap", just one thing I recommend for one I'm not a rapper and I don't do poems but when you end a phrase make sure the next word rhymes when I read the "dont give it an option
Abortion pill." Hence the part "Abortion pill" afterwards it doesn't really rhyme and when you say it-it just loses it's bounce. I'm not trying to put you down or discourage you this really was great and it sounds wonderful just wanted to give some tip if it's worthy enough.
Sometimes raps dont quite rhyme, because if every single line rhymed the rap would suck. It's important to have rhyme and rhythm, but it's just as important to know when it's okay to not rhyme the words and move it to the next area. Part of it is just in how you say it, which is hard to put across through just text. In my head I say the word correctly so that the rhythm stays and the flow isn't interrupted, just the way i see rap that is.
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Alright haha thanks for explaining it I don't really know anything about rapping and your the expert here ;) but it's a great rap haha!
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Alright haha thanks for explaining it I don't really know anything about rapping and your the expert here ;) but it's a great rap haha!
as you said, your not a rapper. Not all raps "rhyme" look at immortal technique.
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as you said, your not a rapper. Not all raps "rhyme" look at immortal technique.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ZwYNxGfSKw (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ZwYNxGfSKw)
He's the best.
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Nice rap Chronic, I'm impressed. Do you think you will be performing through youtube or anything similar?
Oh, i heard of immortal technique, but never took the time to look him up. He's pretty good and I like the message. He also has the best "name" I've seen.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ZwYNxGfSKw (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ZwYNxGfSKw)
He's the best.
truely epic
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I like this, Chronic x. I like to write as well. I just have to be really inspired to write anything worth reading.
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Well done, Chronic x!
Your poem kinda reminded me of a saying I hear a lot in my country: "Don't feel bad if people are talking bad things behind your back. It means you're ahead of them, winning the race". Something like this.
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thanks everybody.
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:-* <3 u
Immortal Technique is a fuckin lyrical beast. Chronic X is EZ's Immortal Technique :P
(http://i.imgur.com/06uMc.gif)
(Immortal Technique The Martyr Album Download)
http://www.viperrecords.com/mart/Immortal%20Technique%20-%20The%20Martyr.zip
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Ill take that as a upmost accomplishment. But real talk, Martyr Is good, but i ike The Point Of No Return More;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Igt-jW4e8ts (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Igt-jW4e8ts)
And if you want some gangster rap with a good rythm;
C Murder - My Block, this shit is made from inside of jail.
He was sentenced to life in prison for shooting and killing a 16 year old teen in a nightclub. His a beast.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=26TdSuOZto4 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AsXWVJWaE7Q)
It's gritty thats how i like my rap and what i get inspired by.
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It really is a complement. Yes I love Immortal Technique raw shit. I like Dancning with the Devil. C Murder is coo too. Although lately I've been on more of the bay shit like Berner, Wiz Khalifa (check out DatPiff). But in the end I'm a Juggalo and this is my shit:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mkvgy4q1H7o
Also another in prison rapper that I like is X-Raided