EvilZone
Other => Creative Arts => : hanorotu October 29, 2012, 08:30:50 PM
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It's a choice,
It's a voice,
In the crowd.
It's courageous and proud.
Who will take a stand?
Who will demand
What's right,
What's not in sight?
Who will relieve
those who grieve
for the life they've made
for the price they've paid?
It's right to know
the beauty people show.
All of us have a light
Some bright
Some faint
Beauty behind the paint.
Paint that is a cover
to the unheard lover,
to the young mother,
to the jealous brother,
to the broken heart,
to the man torn apart,
to those who fall,
to those all.
No one looks behind the paint,
to see the bright and faint.
We only see the face,
The scattered space,
The shame,
The tattered name,
Who will ever stop
To look Behind the Paint.
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Nice. But I think we all choose to not let people see behind the paint... My opinion anyways, people put up walls.
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Amazing, good work :D
Nice. But I think we all choose to not let people see behind the paint... My opinion anyways, people put up walls.
I agree. Most of us won't let people see behind the paint unless we can trust them.
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Thanks guys.
Most of the time all it takes is a few minutes to figure someone out. Walls are easily broken down, if you know what to say.
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Wow. I'm impressed. I saw dj rapture above your name and knew you were into rapping, but I only really saw ChronicX rap. Really nice job. I think one way you can tell it's good is that your brain registers the flow just as easily as if someone were actually speaking. There's no confusion as to how it would sound. You accomplished this.
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Wow. I'm impressed. I saw dj rapture above your name and knew you were into rapping, but I only really saw ChronicX rap. Really nice job. I think one way you can tell it's good is that your brain registers the flow just as easily as if someone were actually speaking. There's no confusion as to how it would sound. You accomplished this.
I DJ occasionally, and I have put out a few pop-rap songs but I'm not really into it. Truth be told I am really into writing lyrics and making music, I would rather have someone else sing/rap it. The actual music is the main thing. I love that shit.
Also, I have a few more of these. I will post them.
This one is called Unjustified Death
Accusations reach to him.
Time's counting slim.
He didn't do those things
But the injection stings.
Poisons seep into his skin.
The room begins to spin.
A life he never took
An unopened book
Who looked to see
The side which he
Had no chance to tell.
He has no church bell
Ringing for his good bye
Because another mans lie.
No person believed
The truth they received.
Truth of his innocence
Covered by suspense.
A wasted life of imprisonment
Of the life he was meant
To spend on the outside
Brought by those who lied.
Grim Reaper comes to claim
A life looked at with shame
A man who was innocent
The wasted days he spent.
An unjustified death of he
Laid to rest with his story
A past he did not deserve.
Accusation absurd
Took this innocent man
When the guilty coward ran.
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Another great one! Are you planning on ever doing anything with your music talent? Professional or otherwise?
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Another great one! Are you planning on ever doing anything with your music talent? Professional or otherwise?
I did at one time, but honestly I don't thing it will ever become anything more than a hobby.
However I did to talk to some android game developers today, and I am currently making tracks for their game.
https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.terrachaos.motoscroller&feature=search_result#?t=W251bGwsMSwyLDEsImNvbS50ZXJyYWNoYW9zLm1vdG9zY3JvbGxlciJd
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This is what pops up when you google behind the paint lol:
(http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/e/e8/Behind_the_Paint.JPG/200px-Behind_the_Paint.JPG)
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This is what pops up when you google behind the paint lol:
Wow, maybe I should re-title this.