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My Draw ~ Kanade
« on: December 03, 2013, 11:41:02 pm »
Hi, here is my drawing retouched with Photoshop

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Total hours: 5h
Material: Pencil HB/0,5; pastel; Photoshop; coloured pencil ; felt tips
Format: A4

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Before  Photoshop:

http://i.imgur.com/XF18dRE.jpg

After:

http://i.imgur.com/3CDqaOR.png


Other:

http://i.imgur.com/TFd0I6S.png
« Last Edit: December 04, 2013, 01:09:55 am by Kanade »

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Re: My Draw ~ Kanade
« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2013, 08:14:10 am »
That's not bad, but it has a weird face :D

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Re: My Draw ~ Kanade
« Reply #2 on: December 04, 2013, 03:14:55 pm »
It's not bad, but you have to work more on your skills. For example, practice on eyes:
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http://www.wikihow.com/Draw-a-Realistic-EyeOR this:
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http://www.dragoart.com/eyes-c301-1.htmHave fun . :D
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Re: My Draw ~ Kanade
« Reply #3 on: December 04, 2013, 11:18:27 pm »
I've been thinking about creating small 10-20 page comics/manga. Maybe we can team up so I can practice my writing and you, your art :)

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Re: My Draw ~ Kanade
« Reply #4 on: December 04, 2013, 11:47:46 pm »
I'm no artist, I used to draw a lot but it's been years since I've drawn.. honestly, you've got a great start but for working on that for 5 hours, you could have done much better. However, it's mostly in the eyes. The hair is great, I love it, but your eyes need a lot of work such as being the same size and being in line. Also maybe a different nose, since you're going with a manga style then maybe have it pointier.


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Re: My Draw ~ Kanade
« Reply #5 on: December 05, 2013, 01:02:19 am »
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http://www.dragoart.com/eyes-c301-1.htmHave fun . :D

dragoart... Oh my god I remember that website. I was really active on it from 2010 to 2011. Jesus that brings back a lot of memories I had forgotten. I had a good friend on there, but I can't find her now :(
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Re: My Draw ~ Kanade
« Reply #6 on: December 05, 2013, 09:59:37 pm »
I've been thinking about creating small 10-20 page comics/manga. Maybe we can team up so I can practice my writing and you, your art :)
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loup.security



I'm no artist, I used to draw a lot but it's been years since I've drawn.. honestly, you've got a great start but for working on that for 5 hours, you could have done much better. However, it's mostly in the eyes. The hair is great, I love it, but your eyes need a lot of work such as being the same size and being in line. Also maybe a different nose, since you're going with a manga style then maybe have it pointier.

Thx for ur suggestin :)

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you've got a great start but for working on that for 5 hours[...]

Photoshop begginer :p