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Other => Creative Arts => : hanorotu March 03, 2012, 02:49:30 AM
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http://soundcloud.com/hanorotu/intoxicated
Discuss.
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Oh no. Love songs!
Like the breakdown and the beat, but words...? Nah :P
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Its not bad really. As a dubstep lover myself, I like it. Its not the best ive heard, and its not a song ill put on repeat. But I would put it in some playlist of mine.
If you want a little more critic you can read the following text.
Some of the text is cool, but other parts of it is a bit to.. Idk, love song. Perhaps a tiny bit to much vocal in general. Then again, it totally depends on the dubstep you are wanting to create.
I am not sure how much bass was in this song, I listened to it on my laptop. But I think I would like to hear a bit more bass, deep bass. The dubstep woobs are good, not perfect but good. I cant quite put my fingers on whats not perfect on the woobs, but something is not perfect.
Just my two cents ;) Idd like to hear more from you.
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Its not bad really. As a dubstep lover myself, I like it. Its not the best ive heard, and its not a song ill put on repeat. But I would put it in some playlist of mine.
If you want a little more critic you can read the following text.
Some of the text is cool, but other parts of it is a bit to.. Idk, love song. Perhaps a tiny bit to much vocal in general. Then again, it totally depends on the dubstep you are wanting to create.
I am not sure how much bass was in this song, I listened to it on my laptop. But I think I would like to hear a bit more bass, deep bass. The dubstep woobs are good, not perfect but good. I cant quite put my fingers on whats not perfect on the woobs, but something is not perfect.
Just my two cents ;) Idd like to hear more from you.
Thank you for the criticism. As not much of a dubstep fan myself, this is what, in my opinion, I think dubstep should sound like. With more rhythm and less spontaneity. I just can't get into the seemed randomness of regular dubstep. However, I may work at it with other songs, and try to get the dubstep feel that everyone loves with my own spin. This is what I do with all of my songs as a matter of fact. I try to have my own style.
On another note, the very end, I hate. It sounded good in the studio, but after I rendered it, it sounds too cluttered.
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Thank you for the criticism. As not much of a dubstep fan myself, this is what, in my opinion, I think dubstep should sound like. With more rhythm and less spontaneity. I just can't get into the seemed randomness of regular dubstep. However, I may work at it with other songs, and try to get the dubstep feel that everyone loves with my own spin. This is what I do with all of my songs as a matter of fact. I try to have my own style.
On another note, the very end, I hate. It sounded good in the studio, but after I rendered it, it sounds too cluttered.
I just had to listen to it with a headset, so I just did. Sounds a lot better with a good headset. I take back the part I said about the vocals, is good. I really do like this song after listening to it with a headset.
Tho I still think it should have more bass. I think a simple bass filter turn up on the background bass and the deeper drums would do the trick. I also take back 50% of what I said about the woob not being perfect :P
EDIT: Also, who is doing the vocals?
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Nate Monoxide, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HpPmCOA66X8 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HpPmCOA66X8)
That is the original, I got all his acapellas from him lol