EvilZone
Other => Creative Arts => : Zesh November 01, 2012, 11:03:34 PM
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This a little peice I came up with in the morning whilst in the bathroom :P
I take a step back
And they call me weak
When I'm not
Even though I've been to the top
It's like trying to seperate peas from the pod
You need to be able to see through the fog
To understand the opinions that people have got
A step back doesn't mean that you stop.
I like it. What do you think? ;)
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I like it. +1
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I like it. +1
Yay, thanks :P
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You rap too? Nice :D You have quite some talent.
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Its good, but these lines make no sense:
It's like trying to seperate peas from the pod
You need to be able to see through the fog
Why do you need to see through fog to separate peas from a pod. If you've ever done this its extremely easy, hence when we eat peas they are normally separated from the pod (except in Chinese dishes primarily)
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You rap too? Nice :D You have quite some talent.
Thanks :D
Its good, but these lines make no sense:
Why do you need to see through fog to separate peas from a pod. If you've ever done this its extremely easy, hence when we eat peas they are normally separated from the pod (except in Chinese dishes primarily)
You a misunderstanding :P These lines go together:
Even though I've been to the top
It's like trying to seperate peas from the pod
Just how peas and pods come together so does me being on top come together, if you get that :P
You need to be able to see through the fog
To understand the opinions that people have got
Now, seeing through the fog should make a lot more sense when paired with that line :D
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It's pretty good, however I wouldn't see myself using this. It's kinda bland and overdone. Sorry bro
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It's pretty good, however I wouldn't see myself using this. It's kinda bland and overdone. Sorry bro
Using it for what?
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Using it for what?
Lyrics? What else?
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Lyrics? What else?
Hm..okay. I thought you had something else in mind :P
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I was going to use it to fap in the EZ community sock but I got soft xD
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I was going to use it to fap in the EZ community sock but I got soft xD
Lol, I've never heard of the EZ community sock before :P
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For VIP use only xD
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For VIP use only xD
Damn! I need to become a VIP :P