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Tutorials / The OSI Model
« on: October 13, 2012, 04:30:02 pm »
Sorry, I am just getting around to posting it. Here is my final draft of the OSI Model. Hope you like it :]

http://upload.evilzone.org/download.php?id=442176&type=zip

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General discussion / Re: My Paper for my English Class
« on: September 24, 2012, 03:20:15 am »
Thanks everyone, and thanks for the help :]

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General discussion / Re: My Paper for my English Class
« on: September 17, 2012, 01:37:37 am »
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Thesis is well developed and clearly focused
Supporting evidence is thorough and relevant
Narrative and description kept to minimum needed for analysis
Conflicting evidence is consistently acknowledged and accounted for
Counter-arguments are consistently anticipated and refuted
Conclusion emerges logically from main arguments
Well organized and well written
(name here), goodjob with the draft! Very good thesis and development throughout. The in-text citations are very good. The references need a little adjustment. Review the sample APA formatted paper posted in Doc Sharing and compare your reference page to that one there.Your argument is superbly developed throughout. For the final draft, be sure that you add some quotes from your references. Good job with the charts. Keep up the great work![/font][/size]

What my teacher said about my paper. I got a 74/75 points on it  :][/font]

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General discussion / Re: I was born today.
« on: September 14, 2012, 11:43:55 pm »
happy happy birthday!

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General discussion / Re: My Paper for my English Class
« on: September 14, 2012, 03:01:36 pm »
@techb: Sure that would be awesome :D Would you like the final version with the changes though?

@Zesh: yea I know I did it often during the paper, I forgot to go back and capitalize when I was reviewing it. :/ But the changes will be made :]

@RedBullAddicted: I sent a pm to you but I will take a look at the website you provided and make of list of changes I can make.

Thanks guys! This is a really big help. :D

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General discussion / Re: My Paper for my English Class
« on: September 14, 2012, 02:46:46 am »
Sure thing.

http://upload.evilzone.org/download.php?id=6318794&type=zip

pdf made it look all professional XD.

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General discussion / Re: My Paper for my English Class
« on: September 13, 2012, 09:18:03 pm »
hey, i did add pictures to the paper itself, i forget how to put them online so i didn't bother XD, if you would like though i can post up the pics i used.

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General discussion / My Paper for my English Class
« on: September 13, 2012, 04:24:44 am »
So I have finished my paper on the OSI Model. I chose it because we had to choose a topic within our careers for school, but it couldn't be a general topic like Computer Science :/. Anyways Critique is welcome, please be nice about it otherwise rudeness will be ignored. The assignment itself will already be turned in but all input will be considered as I review my final draft. It is the last paper of my school term and I really want to make an A on it so all advice is welcome :D . Thanks ^^,


http://upload.evilzone.org/download.php?id=9234959&type=rar

Oh I uploaded it this way so I hope thats ok o.o

Update: I should probably add that Most of the examples I came up with except the one using the IP and MAC addresses, the very last paragraph is also my understanding of an OSI model. None of the resources were used for that, however the resources are listed that were used and cited hopefully correctly XD.

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Operating System / Re: Linux beginner question
« on: September 09, 2012, 07:30:40 pm »
ubuntu
linux mint
pinguy os,
zorin os,
peppermint os3

this is a list of OS's i was given to check out for beginners, after looking into all of them i went with Zorin. Really just choose one that you feel comfortable with, thats what i did. I'm going to give Zorin a try and if i don't like it then there are other OS's out there to choose from.

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General discussion / Re: Post your deskTOP
« on: August 28, 2012, 06:39:42 am »
My desktop. I love orange, and I love chibis. I don't know what they are originally called but that is my name for them :3.




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General discussion / Re: Back to school
« on: August 28, 2012, 06:27:28 am »
My classes are 12 weeks long.  So while everyone is just getting back to school, I am halfway through classes. After that its a week off and then another 12 weeks full of classes. In one class so far that i know of, I have a 4 to 5 week research paper to complete. It will mainly be spread out that long. I do know it will make managing my other classes a heck of a lot easier :D.

On a side note Professor Potato, you have unintentionally trolled me with your bug on the nonexistent man in your icon pic. Yes i poked it with the intent to kill it. If it was intentional I have to say well done, and that I fell for it twice XD.

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