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Re: Rap battle anyone? Give it a go [text]
« Reply #30 on: November 24, 2012, 08:20:33 pm »
Ow! Looks like the kids are playn this case,
Some fame, some shit they're tryin to chase!

Back up! Back up!
Now, clear the floor!
Can't you see, the king's here
To give you a sore
Throat...
Cmon! Get it straight...
You all'll be apologetic
But that's ok...
It ain't my first time, I should let you know...
I may be new to the hood, but yea, so?

Ima wipe out you trash,
Make you look like fools;
Buy you all tickets,
For a stay at the zoo...

It ain't cool using slang,
Can't you see I've used none?
Keep it clean, keep it real,
Well, that's just fun...

You see,
There's no point refuting me,
The way you are, you'll always be,
No improvent, no serenity...
Blank and negative sagacity...

So I'm off now,
Dead tired; need rest...
On monday, I've got a chemisrty test


(yes... For real)
so wish me luck...
In my absence, kids please don't f***

#Diaclaimer - hehe... Just having fun... Nothing personal \m/,
« Last Edit: November 24, 2012, 08:23:36 pm by The_Falcon_Wolf »
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Re: Rap battle anyone? Give it a go [text]
« Reply #31 on: November 25, 2012, 01:27:27 pm »
Ow! Looks like the kids are playn this case,
Some fame, some shit they're tryin to chase!

Back up! Back up!
Now, clear the floor!
Can't you see, the king's here
To give you a sore
Throat...
Cmon! Get it straight...
You all'll be apologetic
But that's ok...
It ain't my first time, I should let you know...
I may be new to the hood, but yea, so?

Ima wipe out you trash,
Make you look like fools;
Buy you all tickets,
For a stay at the zoo...

It ain't cool using slang,
Can't you see I've used none?
Keep it clean, keep it real,
Well, that's just fun...

You see,
There's no point refuting me,
The way you are, you'll always be,
No improvent, no serenity...
Blank and negative sagacity...

So I'm off now,
Dead tired; need rest...
On monday, I've got a chemisrty test


(yes... For real)
so wish me luck...
In my absence, kids please don't f***

#Diaclaimer - hehe... Just having fun... Nothing personal \m/,
Damn, that wasn't bad at all. Do you sing too?


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Re: Rap battle anyone? Give it a go [text]
« Reply #32 on: November 25, 2012, 04:36:04 pm »
Haha! Thankyou! Thankyou! :D

Well, I don't have a typically good voice, but I can manage low notes... I write, compose, play... Been into composing for the past 3 yrs approx... So yea... :)
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Re: Rap battle anyone? Give it a go [text]
« Reply #33 on: December 21, 2012, 07:17:37 am »
Well then, ask around about chronic
They'll whisper his demonic
Now i'm in your head
Don't try to think, im 5 steps ahead
Fuck peace, im not intrested in breaking bread
My heart is like JFK, dead
I dont want or need it
But this hunger to kill and destroy, i feed it
Im maturing but still trying to live free
Calm and cool like ice tea
ready to attack like a african bee
no real target or reason
but for me every minute is open season
to be what i want to be
I'm the opposite of heaven
My address is 187.
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Re: Rap battle anyone? Give it a go [text]
« Reply #34 on: January 05, 2013, 03:29:11 pm »
Ha ha ha!
Who? Me you tryin' to deceive?
Looks like you need a kick,
So that you can freeze!

Look here man,
You've used 'a' before a place where you need 'an',
So you still think you can,
Do this shit?
Well, I do understand,
You need to be taught the grip!

Ima free saturday evening, kid
Call me anytime.
Coz I'll need to teach you,
The rules of rhyme!
But next time,
Make sure you don't screw up this bad!
Else, Ima make you fag,
Ima make you sad!

For now just go home,
And watch me on the TV.
Coz I'm starrin' tonight,
So you'll get to see me.

Keep calm kid,
This stuff takes time.
Keep your pace steady, then
Someday you'll learn to rhyme!

(gosh! I've logged on after a month or so... So busy with my studies, you know! ~ another rhyme :P )
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Re: Rap battle anyone? Give it a go [text]
« Reply #35 on: February 27, 2013, 04:10:02 am »
Come on... Someone reply...  :-\
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Re: Rap battle anyone? Give it a go [text]
« Reply #36 on: October 08, 2013, 07:47:55 am »
Ha ha ha!
Who? Me you tryin' to deceive?
Looks like you need a kick,
So that you can freeze!

Look here man,
You've used 'a' before a place where you need 'an',
So you still think you can,
Do this shit?
Well, I do understand,
You need to be taught the grip!

Ima free saturday evening, kid
Call me anytime.
Coz I'll need to teach you,
The rules of rhyme!
But next time,
Make sure you don't screw up this bad!
Else, Ima make you fag,
Ima make you sad!

For now just go home,
And watch me on the TV.
Coz I'm starrin' tonight,
So you'll get to see me.

Keep calm kid,
This stuff takes time.
Keep your pace steady, then
Someday you'll learn to rhyme!

(gosh! I've logged on after a month or so... So busy with my studies, you know! ~ another rhyme :P )


God, It's been a while
But my skill hasen't faded, Just ecscalated
Stop feeding the fire
I'm the king, your the squire
I drop beats and eat rap
If I was as lame as you id say your stuffs crap
But I learn to respect other peoples effort
At the end of the day you cant touch this
spits and hits like mc hammer
you cant understand the fame and glamour
Space your rap out in verses
Tryin to hard, call the nurses
You need to get treated
Now your gettin' schooled, feel cheated?
You did it to yourself, got me fuckin' heated
Your nothing to me, Don't try to compare
I almost feel bad, it just isn't fair
You had good intentions, but your done
Tell your girl I said thanks for last night hun
Ill merk you, ill eat her
ill fuck your life up in a blur
Come into your house show you what this gangsta shit about
hear your mama's painful shout cause' you showed chronic doubt
now im ready to bang out, call out and go all out
You got in to deep, you wont catch me slippin'
don't try to creep
right hook, go to sleep
So don't waste time to hit me back
This was just a snack don't make me fully attack
Skill and flow you lack, feeble and sad like an addict, no crack
keep an eye out for that suv, all black fully strapped
Back alley, your trapped
Find yourself capped
my crew shows no mercy
Get killed standin' to close to me
While you got the chance, flee
or ill have you weepin' on one knee
Gun to the dome
See ya at tha funeral home.
Can't Stop The Crooks

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Re: Rap battle anyone? Give it a go [text]
« Reply #37 on: October 09, 2013, 10:22:31 am »
Very nice chronic. if i get some time this weekend i might type a few lines


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Re: Rap battle anyone? Give it a go [text]
« Reply #38 on: October 10, 2013, 12:44:16 am »
OMG ITS CHRONIC :O

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Re: Rap battle anyone? Give it a go [text]
« Reply #39 on: October 10, 2013, 07:34:14 am »
Thank you, good to see you still around hanorotu I've been making a few beats and freestyles well have to chat and get a little project together this is just a taste of on the spot thinking and non stop typing as if we were face to face hahaha,
And yes ifailstuff it's the one and
Only ;)
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Re: Rap battle anyone? Give it a go [text]
« Reply #40 on: March 17, 2014, 09:42:39 am »
***old version. a better rap has been added below****


Oh ho its the Chronic man
Thinks he's legit just cause he's back again
Busting rhymes before he goes to bed
But truth is he's just a littke dick head
Missed your rhymes for all this time
Bit he's back and he's trying to rap
On the real I missed you dude
Almost as much as I missed you being rude

I'm back to spit rhymes all day
I'm usually quiet but I got a lot to say
This fuckjng world with its fuxking rhymes
This fucking world and its fucking crimes
I work all day but have no pay
But I'm a part of a working societ-ay

Oh I'm sorry, does that not rhyme?
Well go fuck yourself your a fucking crime

But I've gone off on a tangent
And its time I just end it
Welcome back to the Evilzone
We've missed our Chronic one



I attribute thia one to alcohol. Been wanting to reply for days but haven't found the words till now. Shitty ad they may be. Cheers Chronic, glad to see you throwing lines again ^_^


Finally took the time to write something better:

God, It's been a while
But my skill hasen't faded, Just ecscalated
Stop feeding the fire
I'm the king, your the squire
I drop beats and eat rap
If I was as lame as you id say your stuffs crap
But I learn to respect other peoples effort
At the end of the day you cant touch this
spits and hits like mc hammer
you cant understand the fame and glamour
Space your rap out in verses
Tryin to hard, call the nurses
You need to get treated
Now your gettin' schooled, feel cheated?
You did it to yourself, got me fuckin' heated
Your nothing to me, Don't try to compare
I almost feel bad, it just isn't fair
You had good intentions, but your done
Tell your girl I said thanks for last night hun
Ill merk you, ill eat her
ill fuck your life up in a blur
Come into your house show you what this gangsta shit about
hear your mama's painful shout cause' you showed chronic doubt
now im ready to bang out, call out and go all out
You got in to deep, you wont catch me slippin'
don't try to creep
right hook, go to sleep
So don't waste time to hit me back
This was just a snack don't make me fully attack
Skill and flow you lack, feeble and sad like an addict, no crack
keep an eye out for that suv, all black fully strapped
Back alley, your trapped
Find yourself capped
my crew shows no mercy
Get killed standin' to close to me
While you got the chance, flee
or ill have you weepin' on one knee
Gun to the dome
See ya at tha funeral home.
« Last Edit: March 19, 2014, 02:30:03 pm by Daemon »
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