I think you should show your design in forms like GDF.COM or Howdesignform.com.
youl get some usefull feedbacks with . and yes they will call it crap. Why? Youl have to Go through some books based on typographi, color thewry, Color physiologs, design principles, grid, shape meanings. and soo on
to understand why.
Im not talking shit here, it may look good to you but it doesnt represent the message it should Like the tec savvy kinde . I can say this becaus iv been learning this kinde of stuff for some time.
I will show my design next march . Why then? Read my post at bitch and mone. I promiss it will be worth looking at. By the way if you need help with it then pm me. Im here to help.
And remember learning how to use photoshop or illustoreter is one thing, learning graphic designing is another .