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Offline KevG

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Re: Unfinished drumstep song
« Reply #15 on: April 07, 2013, 03:40:21 pm »
Thanks guys, I really appreciate your honest comments  ;D its hard to find a place where people will actually criticize your work and give you proper suggestions for what to fix. I'll definitely replace the piano.

@silenthunder is the "sd;lkhgaope" part the bass growl that interrupts the wobble bass?

Once again thank you everyone for your compliments and honest criticism  :)

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Re: Unfinished drumstep song
« Reply #16 on: April 07, 2013, 04:17:05 pm »
Thanks guys, I really appreciate your honest comments  ;D its hard to find a place where people will actually criticize your work and give you proper suggestions for what to fix. I'll definitely replace the piano.

@silenthunder is the "sd;lkhgaope" part the bass growl that interrupts the wobble bass?

Once again thank you everyone for your compliments and honest criticism  :)
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Re: Unfinished drumstep song
« Reply #17 on: April 07, 2013, 09:29:38 pm »
Thanks guys, I really appreciate your honest comments  ;D its hard to find a place where people will actually criticize your work and give you proper suggestions for what to fix. I'll definitely replace the piano.

@silenthunder is the "sd;lkhgaope" part the bass growl that interrupts the wobble bass?

Once again thank you everyone for your compliments and honest criticism  :)

Yeah it is, forgot the word for it haha.


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Re: Unfinished drumstep song
« Reply #18 on: April 07, 2013, 10:34:54 pm »
right. Im going to tell you the areas I disliked, not because the track isnt good, it's good. but because i find it easier to say the criticisms. Balancing is off, you have one sample which is much too loud. panning, not too bad, though, i think it is a bit centred. E.Q. wise.. I think that Kick could do with some slight changes.. its very punchy and defined, but it seems to be lacking in something i can't put my finger on.  and the track as a whole, it's missing a layer, I think. mid-range scoops are good as they clean the track up, and make it less muddy, but, i think it's slightly too extremely E.Q'd.  now.. I guess I should tell you what I liked. The arrangement was good, the majority of your sample choices were good. ( That one sample that was too loud... i think was a bit too dampened. it reminded me of someone breathing into a microphone up close.) Overall, A brilliant track, which has been very well produced, despite the areas I think are in need of some bringing up to the rest. :)

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Re: Unfinished drumstep song
« Reply #19 on: April 07, 2013, 10:52:39 pm »
It's Drumstep, if it was dub, I'd never even listen to it.

I can agree to disagree, but this is dubstep. All these new terms for various divinations from just hardcore wubbin is also dubstep.
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Re: Unfinished drumstep song
« Reply #20 on: April 07, 2013, 11:09:06 pm »
I can agree to disagree, but this is dubstep. All these new terms for various divinations from just hardcore wubbin is also dubstep.
Actually if you want to get technical this is brostep. This is dubstep http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k9pBI2GSJrY

I would call this song that was posted DNB with some wubs, the drums define the song.

also here is an electronic music guide that I have used for years http://techno.org/electronic-music-guide/
« Last Edit: April 07, 2013, 11:10:39 pm by hanorotu »


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