Rain and Science

[Corrupted_Fear]

So I got bored tonight and had the urge to mess around with FL studio. I took some tips from hanoratu's guide and a video, and threw together a few tracks. Suggestions? Criticism? OMFG YOU SUCK? Pretty new at this, have no idea what I'm doing, but I find it kinda fun. Let me know what you think, thanks


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[Sparky712]

not bad. ermm... i like how the 'instruments' mix together, however, I think the song structure could use some work.
Official verdict: Very good, especially if you are new to it.

[Corrupted_Fear]

Thanks, I honestly just took a chord and manipulated and exploited it until I got what sounded different. I'll have to look into structure, wasn't going for anything standardly done, was just having some fun

[silenthunder]

Don't add so many notes at one time..I like what you did with the piano on Science, but sometimes you have to remove a couple of the notes so it doesn't sound so clustered. In Science, it's where a chord transitions to the next chord. I liked Rain much more than Science. And like Sparky said, if you're new to this, it's pretty damn good.

[Kulverstukas]

Rain has too long intro. Cut it in half, then it'll be OK.
Science - ugh... sucks

[Corrupted_Fear]

Rain has too long intro. Cut it in half, then it'll be OK.
Science - ugh... sucks

I listened to them both the next day, and came out with the same conclusion xD.